Clear vs Wordy Examples

Side-by-side examples of wordy vs clear phrasing.

Quick answers

What are wordy phrases to avoid?
'In order to,' 'at this point in time,' 'due to the fact that.' Use shorter alternatives.

Key takeaways

  • Cut filler and redundancy.
  • Use active voice.
  • One idea per sentence.

Instead of → Say

Instead ofSay
In order toTo
At this point in timeNow
Due to the fact thatBecause
I would like to suggestI suggest

Example dialogue

Wordy: In order to move forward, we need to make a decision. Clear: We need to decide to move forward.

Common mistakes

  • Passive voice.
  • Filler phrases.

Frequently asked questions

What makes writing wordy?
Filler ('in order to,' 'at this point'), passive voice, redundancy.
How do I make my writing clearer?
Use active voice, cut filler, one idea per sentence.

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